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Apr 15Liked by Raquel S Benedict

Years ago, not too long after the "worldbuilding is the clomping foot of nerdism" post (and whew did that one rile people up!), M. John Harrison made another blogpost on the same subject as your piece here: he compared the big chonky books of your Pynchon and Wallace and others, with the vast series you found then too in epic fantasy. It always stuck with me when he wrote that with enough effort, you could build a world in a line and stuff the rest of the book full of things.

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Apr 14·edited Apr 14Liked by Raquel S Benedict

I remember finding The Poppy War extremely repetitive after around page 150 and thinking “how the hell does this go on for 350 more pages?"

I’ve had similar thoughts for other SFF I’ve read recently too. So much of it is needless bloat, as you say. It’s a real problem.

I’ll risk a controversial opinion and say I loved A Feast For Crows because it was rich and more divorced from plot. Just excellent world building, character development, atmosphere, tone, etc. I know a lot of people hated it for this same reason (it was “boring”).

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Apr 16Liked by Raquel S Benedict

This is an excellent article. I’ve always wondered how so many readers,Bookstagrammers, and YouTube literati consume so much content. I’ve never considered that they might just be devouring books whole in order to knock them off their lists or to review them for their fans.

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Apr 15Liked by Raquel S Benedict

The trick with Infinite Jest is to start it on page 140, then loop around and finish the beginning after you finish the rest. The first 140 pages are what always alienates everyone, but at least it will make sense after you've read the rest, which is not intentionally disorienting

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